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Cancelling an order and read a good bit of text.

Discussion in 'Copywriting & Sales Persuasion' started by yensidtlaw, Jun 18, 2013.

  1. yensidtlaw

    yensidtlaw Power Member

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    Hey all.

    So I'm cancelling an order with UAW, and I found this message right above the cancel button. I maybe just naive about copywriting, but I think this would work pretty well to the average user.

    "Subscription Cancellation

    Due to recent events, we find new subscribers are flocking to UAW, too many subscribers too quickly can negatively effect our service levels and as a result we will be limiting new subscriber enrollment and assessing the quality of each new subscriber before acceptance into UAW. This will not affect current subscribers or renewing subscribers. It will only effect NEW and RETURNING subscribers. It is likely that we will be wait listing all NEW and RETURNING subscribers in the very near future as we do not want our services levels to be negatively impacted by our enthusiastic new subscribers seeking a safe haven for real, authentic and unique article marketing.
    To cancel your subscription to Unique Article Wizard, check the box then press the "Cancel Subscription" button located at the bottom of the form.
    Before you leave us, can you take a minute to share some of your experiences, thoughts or improvements that would have changed your mind or that we could have done better?
    Thank you for taking the time to share your information with us, we wish you the best with your future endeavours.
    ~ The UAW Team "


    What do you guys think? Would you cancel after that?
     
  2. barbie.ken

    barbie.ken Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    yes I would. I don't really care unless they offer some sort of incentives . And it also depend on your reason why you are unsubscribing in the first place..
     
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  3. SpookSEO

    SpookSEO Senior Member

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    If I really have to cancel an order, then I have to. But regarding UAW's new condition, I think it's the only best option to maintain their quality writing services.
     
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    vmbpromo Newbie

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    It depends on why you are cancelling an order. If the reason is critical, then go ahead and cancel. Their new terms are the ways they see appropriate so they can continue their business smoothly while maintaining quality in providing services to their clients.