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Can you judge my landing page?

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by ibrahim11, Apr 15, 2015.

  1. ibrahim11

    ibrahim11 Regular Member

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    Hi, my landing page is http://www.increaseleptin.com/

    Could I have some feedback on it? I am offering buyers a free eBook on how to increase their leptin levels which leads to loosing weight. But they have to enter their email and confirm their subscription first to get the free eBook. At the end of the eBook I have put 3 clickbank products masked/cloaked with my own domain name e.g. increaseleptin.com/example.html will redirect to the vendor's product.

    I have just ordered 50,000 LIVE backlinks for my website homepage and youtube video. My facebook ad keeps getting rejected so should I try bing ads? But if the links to the vendor's products are at the end of my ebook, won't most people not see it? So should I directly advertise my hop link on bing ads? thanks
     
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    mysterysolver Regular Member

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    It's nice, the only that I will add is a logo or something like that
     
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  3. bartosimpsonio

    bartosimpsonio Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    You need a title for the page, mate.
     
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  4. ibrahim11

    ibrahim11 Regular Member

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    Done that, should I try bing ads with my landing page? or should i use direct linking?
     
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    Ellie4294 Regular Member

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    Hi Buddy,

    I am not sure but I think a diet product or related niche cant be mentioned by Linux or Microsoft. What do you think?
     
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    Hi

    I would like to tell you something about it but the webpage simply does not load , it's quite possible many bhw members is trying to check your site now , is it on some kind of shared host ?
     
  7. Conor

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    Perhaps add the word "Free" to the big yellow button.
    Remove the borders from the logos at the bottom.
    Add some Legal Information to the link at the bottom.
    Make the popup form center automatically. It appears a little bit too low on my screen, and the bottom is cut off.
     
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  8. ibrahim11

    ibrahim11 Regular Member

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    I'm using name cheap shared hosting
     
  9. ibrahim11

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    Can you screenshot your view for me and post it? Thanks
     
  10. Zwielicht

    Zwielicht Moderator Staff Member Moderator Jr. VIP

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    I have judged your landing page, and it's guilty! :cool:
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    Anyway, here are a few suggestions:

    • Make the CTA button more orange. It currently looks more yellow and it doesn't stand out much.
    • As bartosimpsonio said, you need a page title.
    • Are you targeting men, women, or both with that weight loss landing page? I know the picture features a feminine body, but the page feels too plain. Adding images of both genders (if you're targeting both) or one gender can help the visitor feel like the product is meant for them.
    • Is the e-book free or do the visitors have to pay for it? This needs to be clearly stated somewhere.
     
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  11. test123test

    test123test Junior Member

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    You got 5 sec... what the Fak is leptin and why do i need it. I dont care at this point I am wondering why the girl has a normal arm and man arm.
     
  12. ibrahim11

    ibrahim11 Regular Member

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    I've changed the page title.
    i would like to target both genders :D
    The ebook is free - the visitor enters their email and when they confirm their subscription the confirmation link redirects them to the ebook. Is there any free alternative to aweber?
     
  13. Zwielicht

    Zwielicht Moderator Staff Member Moderator Jr. VIP

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    Yes, MailChimp and InfusionSoft are a couple of alternatives to Aweber.
    http://mailchimp.com/
    http://www.infusionsoft.com/home2
     
  14. neolight

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    Yes. Add some nice and interesting logo (You can add some big rounded logo on top-left position). Add gradient background (in blue) field or use some pattern. Change that yellow button and write on it that you offer a free book. Change check marks.