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can you guys tell me what you think of my site

Discussion in 'Web Design' started by crankers915, Jun 15, 2012.

  1. crankers915

    crankers915 Newbie

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    i own and operate couple wireless stores in texas im the only person in my area that has a website i want to give in an edge make it more presentable give me your thoughts thank you
     
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    Looks great and professional. Good start on having the edge here with your website while no one else has one.
    Be sure to advertise it plenty in your local stores!
    Good luck :)
     
  3. Th3T3chGuy

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    I personally really like it. Simple, not too flashy, and to the point. Keep up the good work.

    Edit: Quick question, are you not allow to display which cell phones you got in stock? If you are allowed, make another page, displaying them and their prices. Might help, might not.
     
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    Looks excellent. I would also say that it is professional looking and to
    the point.

    Good Luck
     
  5. crankers915

    crankers915 Newbie

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    yeah thats my problem boost has alot of limitations on how we use their logo. another problem is how to set my self apart from the other 28 boost mobiles in town
    thank for ur help fyi im the guy in the videos
     
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    The site looks good though few buttons for navigation.
     
  7. Ninety9media

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    the design is nice

    since you say that you speak spanish (i think thats what is means[FONT=Droid Sans, sans-serif]) [/FONT]maybe a spanish version of the website would be a good idea, if spanish speakers are a big target market for you that is

    put some more info on the products in stock too​
     
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  8. knockoutlocal

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    It's clean and to the point. Few recommendations:
    -Add a testimonials page. Due to the change in Google Places they no longer show stars underneath your business when searched locally unless you have rich snippets. You want to add a testimonials page and tag it with "hreview" tags. Google will pick up the snippets and place the stars underneath your listing in the SERPs.
    -Create a location page for each location you own with a map so you can rank them in the cities organically.
    -For each location on the home page, put it in the format NAP (name, address, phone#) and use microformat tags so google can recognize it better.

    Everything else looks good!
     
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  9. ash134u

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    Its very neat and look professional nice with the point of SEO.
     
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    It looks great mate :) 9.5/10

    though i think you should put some more info
     
  11. wowhaxor

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    I like it too, nice clean theme with good graphics!

    Your onsite from the perspective of a visitor/potential customer is outstanding, I think there is very little that needs worked on. One thing to consider is instead of listing a little bit of spanish and pointing out that you offer spanish services use a script/plugin to generate the entire site in both spanish and english and add the little flag icon so a user may roll between the two easily.

    Aside from that I would say add more content would be great (mostly because it will help you with search engines but also while the layout and graphics and everything is perfect IMO there is not a whole ton to read which is not necessarily a bad thing but its always good to sell a little more than you're currently doing I would say).

    Anyways overall I'd give it 4.5 stars, good work bro it looks professional!
     
  12. jazzc

    jazzc Moderator Staff Member Moderator Jr. VIP

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    Some more recommendations


    • When I click on the location images, it redirects me to youtube. This is a big no-no in my book, as you never want to send the prospect on another site. Keep hosting the videos on youtube, but use a "lightbox" style pop-up. So when the visitor clicks on the image, a pop-up appears and the video is streamed through youtube inside your site.


    • No call to action! Although you don't offer any online services, what 's stopping you from having an email submit form? Tunnel those emails to your weekly newsletter. This will increase the site 's conversion rate.


    • Content. All the site is now a thin landing page. Lots and good content increases credibility. Use review cases of how your clients benefit from choosing you.
     
  13. BRAIN_PAIN

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    Your site looks good and professional, but you need more content and more pages. Also don't redirect visitors to youtube. Instead embed the clips in the website. That will keep your visitors on the website longer :)
     
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    Your site looks great pal - I believe the websites that are simple are the ones that convert the best.

    Now, it looks like you're serving a local market. While your website looks great, you have to do plenty of on-site optimization. Whatever local keywords you're looking to rank for, make sure you include it in your title tag, images alt tag, headers, within your text, etc. This will give you a HUGE boost - trust me.

    Then once that's done THROUGHOUT your site (make sure tags aren't the same everywhere, esp Title tags), then start working on your off-site local marketing :)

    Let me know if you need help with anything - PM me because I may not see this thread ha

    Nonetheless, best of luck!
     
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    I disagree with your concept of "the websites that are simple are the ones that convert the best".
    Of course, it can be true at any time. But you'll have to experiment with the results.

    Often, people/customers want much more information at a glance. If they aren't getting the info. they want, they aren't going to buy >> less conversions.

    Just my 0.02 ;)
     
  16. crankers915

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    i really appreciate your feedback. will certainly change and send you a link to see what you think.
     
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    can you pm me when you get a chance i cant pm yes i would really like your help i have a few questions.
     
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    Simple yet catchy site. Just keep in mind that the content is still more important.
     
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    Great layout! Not too wordy, yet it still clearly outlines your products. Good colors, too.
     
  20. msonic

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    the site looks great. it's simple, easy to use, and elegant. out of curiosity, who did the design for you?