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Can someone rate my writing quality for my money site?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by justanotherkid, Aug 31, 2014.

  1. justanotherkid

    justanotherkid Newbie

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    the keyword I'm targeting is around 30 KW difficulty on keyword revealer.
    I order and then rewrite some articles, was wondering whether an experienced writer/ SEOer could tell me whether I could use my rewritten articles on a money site. I'd rather keep the article private so PM or Skype would be better. thanks!
     
  2. OriginalMotive

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    I will.

    I don't have enough posts to PM yet, but you can PM me. If you want an honest opinion, as well as constructive criticism on how to change those areas that I may see as worth changing, I will give it.

    (btw I don't know anything about the keyword revealer. I use Moz' KW difficulty tool, though what is used should be irrelevant for any real copy)
     
  3. justanotherkid

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    thanks, I PM'd you!
     
  4. Asif WILSON Khan

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    You just PM'ed your article (probably giving away your niche) to a user with 7 posts.
    No offence to OriginalMotive but how did you ascertain that he was " an experienced writer/ SEOer"?
     
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  5. Spiderpot

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    its not posible since PMw
     
  6. OriginalMotive

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    None taken, W130SN. I'm not stealing anyone's niche, but you're right, there's no way to ascertain anything.

    justanotherkid, I've given you a couple of pointers if you want them. I need 15 posts before I can send PMs, so if you'd like them, PM me an email address where you want them sent. I've also re-written your article a bit, just to give you a specific idea of the way I would have written the article.
     
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    He is new here but he can be an experienced or expert IMer.
     
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    Thanks, for understanding, I was just trying to highlight to OP and others the dangers of trusting things at face value.
    I am sure you are just being helpful but not everybody would behave in the same way.


    This is true but at the same time he could be a noob or scammer (Again, not directed at OriginalMotive, just an observation.), it is hard to verify with a new user. A JrVIP may essentially be a noob or a scammer but at least his previous posts and actions on the forum allow you to make a better judgement.
     
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