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Can someone rate my french text?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by MicGrez, May 22, 2012.

  1. MicGrez

    MicGrez Regular Member

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  2. BlackTagine

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    Is this google translate ??:) am kidding ...
    If in 3 month you can write it's ok , it's readible it make sens,but there are some mistake , like gender(female,male) and other stuff i can't describei n my poor english :)
     
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  3. kokoloko75

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    I corrected your text quickly (I missed some typos) :
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    http://pastebin.com/c2qwDRxG
    You made mainly errors with male/female (his/her), as said by BlackTagine.
    BlackTagine, you're from Morocco or north africa ?

    My english is not perfect to explain another language, but I'll give a try :

    "his hair" or "her hair" = "ses cheveux".
    "I admire" = "j'admire" and not "je admire" (the " j' " is like "I'm" for "I am").

    In english you say "a man" or "a woman" but in french you'll say "un homme" and "une femme".
    If you speak about a male you'll write "il est grand", and for a female "elle est grande".
    The "e" at the end is for a woman only and not for the third person singular.

    "Pendant son carriere" = "Pendant sa carrière" because "carrière" is feminine.
    "Son maisons" = "Sa maison" because "maison" is feminine.
    And you don't put a "s" at the end of "maison" because "s" is when there are multiple ("1 maison" and "2 maisons").

    About female and male, you'll say "sa femme" (feminine), "son fils" (masculine) and "ses enfants" or "ses filles" or "ses fils" (multiple male or female).

    Hope it helps :)

    Beny
     
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  4. Ann Onime

    Ann Onime Registered Member

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  5. kokoloko75

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    Nice !

    Just few typos forgotten like me :D
    (Example : "au USA" will be "aux USA")

    Beny
     
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    Yeah and I also forgot the s for "Ses yeux sont verts" (plural) ;)
     
  7. MicGrez

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    hanks guys;) do you think I can get a C on this one?:S
     
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    Kokoloko75:
    Oui je viens du Maroc
     
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