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Can someone give me feedback on my landing page?

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by TheNewMiner, Jun 30, 2015.

  1. TheNewMiner

    TheNewMiner Registered Member

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    I'm new to affiliate marketing and have just looked into ClickBank.

    I'm using landingi to create a landing page and converting it to a ClickBank affiliate. I haven't actually implemented this strategy yet, as I still need feedback on my landing page.

    http://0cfc3sxt.dotests.com/

    Do you guys think this is convincing or not? I'm new to marketing and landing pages. If not, what should be improved?

    Note: This is NOT an affiliate link. I am not looking for clicks, only feedback.
     
  2. hateandbreak

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    Doesn't look bad OP. Sometimes simple converts better! Recommend using Leadpages or Clickfunnels if possible. When dealing with LP's it is best to make multiple landers and send traffic to all and see which is your best converting. That is when you're like "oh wow, didn't expect this ugly fucker to convert so well"!

    Best of luck bud
     
  3. fredfred547

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    Looks pretty good. The only thing is that I would add more "pop" and show more benefits and/or reasons to sign up.
     
  4. soccerlover

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  5. goodgame

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    Looks good nice job bro.
     
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    need to give them a reason to sign up. ask yourself "would I put my name and email in this?"
     
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    Neat and good Theme.. Try to give some freebie to get Lead..
     
  8. dromero

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    Great job!

    Not responsive html, mobile devices have to pinch and then fonts are too small.

    Photos from testimonials are distorted in proportions.
     
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    It looks good. Good job
     
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    Not that great IMO, it could use some minor improvements but overall you could test it and see what type of CR you can get
     
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    Work on load speed as well.
     
  12. Paper-Boy

    Paper-Boy Elite Member

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    I would look at successful sites in the same niche and model my sites after them.

    Your site is okay. I would continue to improve it.
     
  13. HoNeYBiRD

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    noticed this too and i hate it :)
    i think it should be the 8th deadly sin or something lol
     
  14. Nulledforyou

    Nulledforyou Newbie

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    Hey just checked out your landing page.
    Looks good but here are my pointers:
    1. The logo its good, but make it transparent so it blends in with the BG not a white rectangle.
    2. Tell the users it Only takes 5 mins to setup not 20 :p (some can be put off by 20 minutes & other users are faster than others)
    3. Include a footer after testimonials.. including Copyright / Policy Info and other contact Info. gives it a more professional look and not like a scam.

    If you need help with the logo shoot me a pm and hope the tips help ya out :)

    slainté
     
  15. HoneyHelper

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    nice! That will work!

    Are they real Testimonials?

    HONEY!
     
  16. tikkytring

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    5/10 too many graphics and background pictures. it would be much beater with cleaner pics
     
  17. sherif-azmy

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    well it looks good.

    Good Luck