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Can I write my content? :(

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by loveghost003, Mar 17, 2014.

  1. loveghost003

    loveghost003 Regular Member

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    Guys I don't have much money to outsource my money content, and I want to make my content professional for native speakers.
    So I want to write my content but I can't recognize if my content is readable enough to be read easily for native English speaker.
    I hope you read this little paragraph to tell me if it's okay for native speakers or no:

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  2. srinu0812

    srinu0812 Supreme Member

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    Even I spotted some grammar mistakes. You need to improve a lot.
     
  3. Jeff Bezos

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    Sorry mate, its not that good. I can point out a couple of things but you're definitely going to need to get someone to proof read for you. The first line should read

    "Weight loss programs are not deigned for comfort, instead they are deigned to give you the body you've been dreaming about"

    Something like that. It doesn't make sense the way you have it so I changed the meaning a bit.

    Not only that, your article needs to be well researched, suggesting that apples and spinach are not good diet foods will make you lose your audience straight away. Even it it's not true, try convincing someone that spinach isn't good for you.
     
  4. innosoft

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    keep trying mate. u gotta improve.. but believe me no one can write 100% perfect english :)
     
  5. Jeff Bezos

    Jeff Bezos Junior Member

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    That's a good point. The best way to learn is to maybe see if you can find a coach. Write some articles and have them sit down with you and point out what's good and what needs improving.
     
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    Numbuh362 Elite Member

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    It's readable but it looks a bit like extremely well spun content.
     
  7. islandman1010

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    Its hard to read for native speakers and it doesn't flow properly. I doubt that many English speakers would read much after the first paragraph. Maybe you can write them again and get them proof read by a native English speaking student or someone like that who could do it cheaply.
     
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    Looks like what I imagine my French teacher used to see when I used to use the translator on my homework.
     
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    evilclown Senior Member

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    To write content, you need to write and read like a maniac. The fist few attempts are gonna be horrible. But keep waking at it, is like with anything the more you do it the better you get at it.
     
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  10. luckyjim

    luckyjim Newbie

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    This is really Shit
     
  11. innosoft

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    Dont Discourage anyone! Reported! :)
     
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    krishnaverma Power Member

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    The content is ok but not that good. You need to write more and it will certainly improve. I do not consider even myself as exceptional writer but I do not have to struggle to find clients. In fact, content writing has been the primary source of income for me. All the best.
     
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  13. Dresden

    Dresden Regular Member

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    If you have doubts just look up grammar mistakes on google and read a lot of English content. That's how I learned to write in a completely different language... The more work you put into it the more your going to learn and remember. It's worth learning because It'll help you not only in IM.
     
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    use google chrome and add "google online autocorrect" you will be fine.

    -=-
     
  15. GreenBird

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    I suggest you to go and watch\hear more movies/music/shows in english
    it can really improve your grammar.

    well that how you can improve,I am not a native english speaker but after a while of writing/hearing music and watching shows
    i feel like my grammar is way better then before :)
     
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  16. innosoft

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    Yeah this does help!! :)

    Also you can use ms word to fix your grammar mistakes.
     
  17. luisk

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    Read some articles or try to start reading a book in english, but it's very important to choose subjects you really like so you won't get bored when you are doing the task. Watch english movies with english subtitles, that can help you a lot to improve your writing skills. Be consistent, and good luck.
     
  18. hotguy640

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    Atleast you can write better then me.