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  1. Nut-Nights

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    Hi guys :) I am still working to get readable and mid quality content just check below samples and rate them.

    Sample 1 :-

    On sunny winter days Beckert from Staufen fall in southwest Germany ever breaking a sweat. When the sun shines through the large windows, it is far too hot in the living room. Turn down heating? Beckert have underfloor heating. And can not even just switch off.

    Even for heating needs in the Beckert around three hours. And as long after switching off until it is no longer giving heat to the living space. Would Barbara Beckert afternoon, when the sun pops into the room, turn down their heating, would this affect the evening. Then, when the sun has gone down and the heater is again urgently needed. Therefore, the Beckert rather do nothing and let the heater run easy.
    Barbara Beckert has learned her underfloor heating in spite of such reaction times underestimated. And she is not alone with their preference: According to the Federal Association panel heating and cooling systems (BVF) is already equipped every second emerging one- or two-family house with underfloor heating.

    The advantages are obvious: There are no irritating radiators, underfloor heating is environmentally friendly, clean and healthy - and it is usually low , because the water heater does not have to be heated so much. Of course, it takes some getting used to adapt to their specific - and so really to be able to use all its advantages.

    Heat from the stove as


    A phase Barbara Beckert has lived through. She had moved with her family ten years ago in their new home equipped with underfloor heating. She who loves walking barefoot on the bare floor so was especially enthusiastic about the type of heat that comes out of the ground.

    She knew from her previous apartment with conventional radiators only the so-called convection. This is swirling air with plenty of dust, which heats the room only for a short time.

    Quite different is the underfloor heating. It produces the so-called radiant heat which is perceived as pleasant as healthy and sustainable, much like the warmth of
    wood stoves and stoves. This is due to the large radiating surface. It is usually hot water circulating in long plastic pipes in the floor. And that must first look at the floor and the flooring warm up before the heat is transferred to the apartment and can heat.

    Screed flooring and the water-filled tube system then act together as oversized radiator with a large mass of material. And so it may take until you can feel the heat slightly. And if you like to have a little cooler, you can not just turn it off - just before going to bed about.

    Sample 2 :-


    These nine days of investigation into the murder of Loris Stival will have been long, too long for someone, but definitely helpful.

    They provided some important certainties and have clearly focused on what really remains to know. Here's a picture. NEVER WENT TO SCHOOL Loris Stival, despite her mother Veronica has from the beginning supported stubbornly to the contrary, has never reached that morning the elementary school. They say the four cameras that were supposed to capture the images along the way from home to school, but it says a fifth especially electronic eye, the implantation of a convenience store right in front of his house. Loris is seen at 8.32 down from Polo Black and reboot itself towards the front door.

    A DARK OF 36 MINUTES After 17 minutes, at 8:49, the Polo Black Veronica comes home. You park with care, though different maneuvers to place the car in the starting position. It is always the camera that says so. The camera itself that the surprise out of the house again at 9.25 thirty-six minutes later. What had happened in the meantime to Loris, where was he? The answer would have an interest in and if the autopsy would lay precisely in that hour, say between 9:30 and 10, the child's death. THE POLO NEAR THE MILL The mother is asked to explain why in running the drive between two cameras public of Santa Croce, instead of employing plausibly around 3 minutes, there puts 9, six minutes more, in a span of time ranging from 9.27 to 9.36.

    Here, too, the answer would make little sense if its in the middle between the two cameras you can not find the farm road to the Old Mill, where Loris, at 16.55 would have been found dead. Because those 6 minutes more? GARBAGE BAGS strange story. Veronica says she asked Loris, that morning, to bring down two garbage bags. The baby delivery him one and then come home. The mother said that this first bag would be thrown by the wayside. And the second? Claims to have taken her and to have him thrown in a dumpster when it succeeded home. But have not been found neither the first nor the second, despite the Police, soon after the discovery of the body, they checked all the boxes in the country.

    THE BACKPACK AND SLIP was taken, that decision, because it was looking blue backpack with straps yellow baby. Backpack never found. Are up in flight even helicopters, hoping to find a trace, but nothing. Should be inside the two snacks that Veronica claims to have delivered to Loris' because I had no time to preparagli a sandwich, "and who knows what else. SLIP THE VARIETY The small Loris was found fully dressed, with apron school yet him, but without slip, that Veronica vows to put him. Two days later, right next to the school, sprouted another pair of briefs, his size, blue like his, but that were not his. Only a villain instead compulsive liar or a sign, a warning?


    Sample 3 :-

    The finance ministers of the euro countries on Monday decided to extend their financial rescue plan for Greece by two months until the end of February next year.


    The European rescue plan for Greece would normally expire at the end of this year, but international lenders have still not compare with Athens found the exact situation of public finances in the country. Therefore a final installment of 1.8 billion can not be provisionally transferred to Greece.The Greek parliament rallied in the night from Sunday to Monday after the budget for next year, but the lenders do not agree with the figure work.

    They believe that the government needs two to three billion additional revenue to meet budgetary insist on some additional measures. In Athens, however, that the sounds draconian savings regime politics threatens to become unsustainable.
    A breakthrough for the year-end the euro Ministers considered impossible. It was therefore decided to grant a technical extension of two months.

    Chairman Jeroen Dijsselbloem is pretty sure that this period will be sufficient to find a compromise and make the remaining disk, a point which would be put behind the rescue plan.
    But then Greece will still be European framed. To reassure the financial markets, the euro Ministers Greece do want a financial safety net in the form of a preventive credit line from the European rescue fund ESM throw. The conditions and monitoring are much less strict than in the current rescue program.




     
  2. jelly91

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    pretty good dude
     
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  3. Nut-Nights

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    If you can rate these articles it will be great :)
     
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    Should this text be perfect? It's got some gold in it but needs a little work. Here's an example:

    YOUR TEXT
    On sunny winter days Beckert from Staufen fall in southwest Germany ever breaking a sweat. When the sun shines through the large windows, it is far too hot in the living room. Turn down heating? Beckert have underfloor heating. And can not even just switch off.

    CORRECTED BY ME
    Even on sunny winter days Beckert (from Staufen Fall, in Southwest Germany) was still sweating. His living room has large windows, and when the winter sun shone through it became unbearably hot. Why didn't he turn down the heating? Beckert had underfloor heating, heating that he couldn't simply 'switch off'.



    Obviously a large part of writing is style, tone and aim. I don't what you're going for with these articles but the above is the sort of correction I would make.
     
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  5. Nut-Nights

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    What about readability and quality ?
     
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    Not trying to be an asshole, but it's filled with errors, it's unreadable.
    I did not even make past the first couple sentences.
    Now I don't know what your aim with these articles is, but I wouldn't want these on any of my sites where users might read it.
    I might use it for tier 2 linkbuilding though.
     
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    No offense, but terrible - 1/10 in both readability and quality. Nothing makes sense and they're all riddled with grammar errors in almost every sentence. I assume these are generated articles? If you paid someone to write these, get a refund. :)

    Jared
     
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  8. TwistedSEO

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    Are these spun articles? I would probably use this quality for tier 2/3
     
  9. Nut-Nights

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    just a rewrite :D i hate paying money for content and i am still on first stage of generated articles.
     
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    Are you creating a spinning software?
     
  11. imserious

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    As others have already pointed out, these are clearly machine generated. Have many grammar errors and readability is not there.

    4/10. Will use these for 2nd tier.
     
  12. Nut-Nights

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    yeah something like that.
     
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    I'm quite relieved to find out these were spun; I was trying to be constructive in my critisism, now I can be more open and admit to you that they're total poo poo.
     
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  14. Nut-Nights

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    ok :) I agreed they are really poor articles.
     
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    Pretty Cool Article, I can Rate This 10/10 :)
     
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    The first thing i noticed is no heading.

    That spinner sucks , use it only for tire3+.
    -=-
     
  17. Nut-Nights

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    What about this short rewrite news:-

    US authorities have tightened export regime for five companies and organizations in Russia. On Wednesday reported by the US Department of Commerce.
    The list appeared, including holding "Voentelekom", which provides equipment for the Russian Defense Ministry, and the company "Nuklin", which has been supplying engineering, electrical and power equipment, transfers RIA news. Also tightened the rules for the Academy of the security business, specializing in the technology of the polygraph - "lie detector".Note, only the list of untested suppliers were 29 companies from different countries. They respect the abolition of privileges with export control and impose stricter licensing rules.Add to DOC tightening mode explained by the fact that they could not confirm the "good faith" suppliers. Because of the situation in Ukraine to limit the supply of US military products in Russia.


     
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    A bit better than the original ones when it comes to readability, but still I would never want to read that. Ever. And I just did so my eyes are sort of burning.

    Some really stupid sentences in there to be honest.
     
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    All of these articles are really difficult to read and make little sense.

    If you bought the spinner, you need to bin it and get a new one, because it does not work.
     
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    Hmm I don't think you need to be a writer, or even know a word of English to be able to review these. I would not want my links anywhere remotely near these articles. Sorry dude, but no. No no no no no.
     
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