anyone want to critique my squeeze page?

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by bmminc, Jan 10, 2015.

  1. bmminc

    bmminc Regular Member

    Nov 29, 2014
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    I have a PPC campaign set up and I get a decent CTR on bing ads with my keywords, they are targeted and the ad is pretty clear in what they are getting, however not a single person has opted in on this particular page.

    My other campaign has about a 10% opt in rate, which seems low to me too. Looking for advice on my squeeze page for you vets to see if its just my niche, or my page.
  2. popbradley

    popbradley Power Member

    Jun 15, 2009
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    I've been messing with them for a while now and when I try and convince them with tons of incentives and explain in long detail what they will get they hardly optin. My best converting page is like 35% right now and all it says is something like "man finds amazing solution to fix your stupid problem!" And the call to action says "watch video" then they click it and a form pops up that says we will send them the video plus a free report or something. So pretty much the shorter and simpler the better. Hope that helps