I am well aware that English may not be your first language so I wanted to give you some pointers that may help you. I encourage others to join in and give them some tips also to make them better writers. It will benefit them and us as a whole. 1. Advices - There is no such word. the word is "Advice" either singular or plural 2. Talking about finding more information on the internet.... NO! They are on the internet already why tell them to search more? 3. Many people in the world - I prefer "People all over the world" Those are my top 3 problems with articles. List them out people and help the writers get better.