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$800 in 30 hours From a Unicorn and a stack of books

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by ericmedem, Apr 10, 2009.

  1. ericmedem

    ericmedem Newbie

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    Sounds crazy I know...but it's 100% true.

    I thought some of you copy guys might find this interesting...

    After reading and listening to stacks on info on NLP and persuasion...and a boatload of Frank Kern...I decided to experiment a little...Though I don't claim to know much about any of this "Wierdo shit"

    So, instead of using video as so many people rely on...I wanted to create some state changes on my sales page....Then casually slide my sales message in while my readers were in downtime......

    Knowing that my sales page readers were used to the same old "Buy my shit" message....

    I decided to throw a couple "State changers" into my sales copy via...A unicorn, a pile of aged books and an asian next to a pile of money...

    As i'm sure most of you know...most buyers are scanners....but imagine their surprise as they scan my sales page and a unicorn appears in my Proof section....

    I can tell you I didn't change hardly anything on my sales page except for the addition of:

    A Stack of old books

    A unicorn

    An Asian next to a pile of money

    My sales which have been running quite flat lately skyrocketed....

    In just the last couple days we've done over $800, with no change in traffic.

    As compared to before the change, over that same period we would have done roughly $200-$300....

    Just something I thought a few of you might like to experiment with...

    I hope it would not be considered spamming to send you to my salespage as I don't think that this forum is a hot bed for real estate activity.

    you can see the sales copy at GreatGuruGiveaway.com...
     
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  2. ben9999imsc

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    Find a more beautiful Asian girl can make you $8000
     
  3. halfalump

    halfalump Regular Member

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    omfg, priceless! you are the next Frank Kern.

    "Did I Mention That the Ultimate Investor System Can Also Help You Find Unicorns?"



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  4. halfalump

    halfalump Regular Member

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    srsly, i just looked over your sales letter. very nice job of holding / resetting attention. now, split test some other weird shit to see if you can top those results.
     
  5. MuonTrail

    MuonTrail Registered Member

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    lmao I can see how that could be a state changer, yes. It does actually give me an idea of something to try with my e-whoring though...

    There's a lot of NLP info out there.. anything that you read that you'd recommend?
     
  6. edynamite

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    These kind of LP's sucks.
     
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    scb335 BANNED BANNED

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    And yet, are so damn effective...

    Congrats ericmedem, that's an impressive boost from some creative thinking!
     
  8. rawaccess

    rawaccess Regular Member

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    cool beans. thx for sharing this. i bet it's not the old books that is helping but the unicorn :)
     
  9. enrikole

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    man, that is the longest sales letter i have ever read:)
     
  10. antsaoo

    antsaoo Supreme Member

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    Dam man , you could sell your sales letter as new book lol, Lol @your "student" Wonder what planet did she sell :D
     
  11. mnapper

    mnapper Registered Member

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    Well hot damn! Maybe I could toss in a fairy and a mermaid and make a million. =) Great ideas though in all seriousness. Thanks
     
  12. dithmo

    dithmo Newbie

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    lol, that is genius. i found myself reading the couple of lines after each pic as i scanned through and i was only looking for the pics. if those couple of lines have interest capturing info then your on to a winner
     
  13. Roversierr

    Roversierr Registered Member

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    Great thinking - just shows how "outside the box" can work-well done!:)