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1st Campaign on TeeSpring - How it Looks ?

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  1. K.H.R

    K.H.R Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    Hello,

    This is my 1st campaign on TeeSpring. How it Looks ? I need your Honest Feedback. Is this Looks Good ?
    TeeSpring Link: http://teespring.com/iam-programmer

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    What do you think about this Guys ? Will I get Good Sells with FB Ads?
    I targeted the Audience Precisely. I am Hopeful But I need your Opinion & Valuable Advice about the Audience Targeting.

    Thanks in Advice.
     
  2. JhonConzix

    JhonConzix Junior Member

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    the design is great ! I'm a programmer but I won't buy that t-shirt . Why ? not appealing enough, not targeted enough, have you thought of designing a t-shirt for girls programmers ?
     
  3. K.H.R

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    I just Designed it for the Boys.
     
  4. HamFighters

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    Where is the open tag <code>???
     
  5. grafx77

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    Only one real way to find out. Run a contest via PPE and allow your demographic to vote between 2-3 designs to come up with your winner.

    You can thank me later. ;-)
     
  6. blackmint

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    Don't know about FB Market or Teespring.
    But the Design looks good to me.
     
  7. SimpleSiteSolutions

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    You're on the right track but not quite there. I can't really put my finger on exactly what but the things that stand out are:

    1. The clouds (are they clouds?) seem out of place
    2. The missing "A" in "I am a programmer"
    3. It's missing humor. Humor sells t-shirts

    Honestly I think "Keep Calm and Program" with some code tags added in there somewhere would do better. I know it seems cheesy but every shirt I see is "Keep Calm and..." something
     
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  8. K.H.R

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    Thanks for your Suggestion. I made another Campaign with "Keep Clam & Code". Thats why I made this One.
     
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    I like the sound of that one better than the one I suggested. It has a nice ring to it. As long as you have graphics (like the 1s and 0s) to make the message obvious. Of course this is all opinion as I have no data to back it up.
     
  10. trooper

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    :lame:............................
     
  11. netcelal

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    What is your Price for this tshirt ?
     
  12. Aatrox

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    Design is good, but I think there is just too much going on there. Don't think hard about, think a bit smaller and simpler.
     
  13. Mimissor

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    Some thoughts here...

    Critiques:
    1. It's too busy. There's too much going on.
    2. "I am Programmer" is too far down. You don't want words over the stomach like that because not everyone has a flattering belly and they probably don't want people reading their stomach flab.
    3. "I write code" is redundant. If you're a programmer then it follows that you write code.
    4. The Font for "I am Programmer" Is somewhat difficult to read. You might want to switch it with something else.

    Suggestions:
    1. Remove the clouds
    2. Put "I am Programmer" at the top where the clouds are now
    3. Have the ones and zeroes falling from the text
    4. Remove "I write code" completely
     
  14. Nut-Nights

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    Your front design is good But you need to work on back design.