This is the first time I created a sales letter. I hope you guys can give me some tips on improving it

I'm using this email for cold-calling, but I'm not really comfortable to disclose it publicly.

PM me your email and I will send you the sales letter (I cannot PM yet), thanks in advance!!

Just post it in the thread.

Post it here, I'll help you

Post it here so everyone can rip it

If this is your first time doing this, just copy one made by an expert in the field. Just change the words around a bit to convey your product.

POst it here. You wont get a better opportunity to have it ripped apart - which is exactly what you want. Battle-tested, field experienced veterans picking it apart. You are better off doing that, then doing a mailing and get zero response or worse yet, negative response.

Let's see it!

Don't be shy about it man, we can't help you if we can't see it and we won't RIP you/it too awful bad

I would like to review it. Use skype for contacting if pm is not possible. Simple as that !!!