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Originally Posted by wakkaoaka
http://moneysiphonsystem-2008.blogspot.com/
Could you please check out the blog and video and tell me what you think? And any improvements I could do? This is my first proper clickbank oriented blog.
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Hey man. I checked it out...here's the deal.
First off, you need to take out the google ads. Lose them because they are making you lose sales. Never put ppc on a landing page. It distracts from the point and instantly makes the page look like an advertisement. It also causes the traffic to click off the page instead of buying your product.
If you do the analysis on that alone, it will tell you that you are losing your traffic in 3 main ways:
* They are seeing your page as an ad effort, going in 20 different directions and leaving.
* They are clicking off page through your google ad and making you a few cents instead of a massive cash sale from your product.
* They are reading your current content and leaving because again, they see it as a sales page.
The last one here brings me to the content, which you are confusing your customers and turning them from visitors to hits...which is obviously the opposite of the objective you are wanting to reach.
1. Change your headline. If you want to support justifying the system not being a scam then don't state it being so right off the bat. People that are interested in it and support J. will instantly be offended and close out or worse, flame you. Turn it to something like ' Money Siphon System - Success or Scam? '
That's more objective and diplomatic, refraining from the risk of your headline being taken as fact or more importantly, as your personal opinion.
2. Get the content to read different, taking the direction that you are wanting to clear the air of the bad rumors about the product and how you fully support it. Present the video as a call to action for the visitor to make their own choice by you giving them access to the information.
This makes them take the action required, as well as makes them make the decision to buy or not.
Make it clear that if they do have any interest in purchasing it, to be sure they use your affiliate link for the discount that you are offering if they buy through you with the 51% offer.
This also will present that you are not only giving them the information they need about this hot new product but the favored change of getting it at a discount as well, making you look even better when they do the math.
3. Change your buttons. Get those buttons to read a call to action, not the sale offer. A sale offer that direct will NEVER get clicked, even if they do choose to buy it. Our minds as humans have been conditioned to be frugal, practical and rational in our impulse spending by censoring ourselves against blunt ad tactics.
Hope this helps.
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