Sales Funnel

Hi there,

I have just made my first sales funnel. I'm hoping you guys can give me some feedback.

I will post the Landing Page link and the Thank You page so people don't think this is ploy to get e-mails.. NO e-mails required here people.

jameswilderonline.com/LeadCreator

jameswilderonline.com/LeadCreator/thankyou.html


The video I have is just a rough draft - I will do a better voice over before I launch it, but wondering if you guys think that the slide itself is attention keeping?

Appreciate it.